Pitch
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We pitched our ideas to our class mates in our media lesson. Afterwards we got our class mates to fill out a questionair to aid our planning.
The questionaire
Here are the questions we asked our classmates after our pitch.
What I did with our results....
I placed some of the responses in a graph:
From this we conculded that most people liked the idea of a crime/runaway, so we decieded to keep the idea but change it slightly to suit our teams best intrest.
Feedback we recieved from teachers and class mates
Classmates Feedback
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After our pitch our class mates gave us feedback and questioned our methods, after this we dropped the idea of having a gang back story, as our classmates suggested that this would be diffucult to demonstrate in the 2 minutes, they also admitted they were confused by the idea and thought it was better without it.
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They all liked the idea of a chase
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74% of the class thought the idea of flashbacks was confusing and cliche, due to the high percentage we decided to drop it.
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They also advised us not to add or mix another genre in with the thriller/action saying that it would be diffucult to achieve in 2 minutes.
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They also mentioned that it could be improved by simplifying the idea -so by removing the flash backs and the revenge back story.
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They also liked the title (However it has now been changed due to the many changes)